Score: 8

"it was cute"

submission: Nerd Love

date: December 10, 2009

For a first not bad. It was cute. Errors here and there, but who doesn'thave em eh?

Score: 4

"Not bad.."

submission: Dragon Fist 3

date: December 1, 2009

A lot of effort was put into this, but I found a lot of bugs with the game.

I didn't like the fact that the character walked by itself...and the placement of the buttons for the fighting and blocking were far away...The character also didn't respond at times..

I like where this is going though.

Score: 7

"Nice"

submission: Breath Me Remake

date: November 29, 2009

it was beautifully animated, and obviously a lot of time and effort went into this. My only gripe is that it just kind of felt like it dragged on. I think after the first minute, we understood the theme...it would have been interesting if you had made a really striking meaning, but it was pretty much rehashing the same idea over and over in a different way- don't get me wrong. I really liked this, nor would I be able to create something as visually pleasing, but it just dragged on for me.

I hope to see more of your work though. :-) Keep it up!

Score: 9

"hope this wins."

submission: Duet of the Hunt

date: November 29, 2009

It's sad. But really nice.

Score: 6

"It's nice"

submission: Canine Tales- Dearest

date: November 29, 2009

It is pleasant, and I already watch you on deviantart. ;-) And your illustration skills ARE good, but I was hoping to see a little more movement from the dogs. It was mostly tweens.

Not bad for an experiment though. Hope to see more. :-)

Score: 7

"should have found a better way to end it"

submission: OB King of da portalthing

date: November 7, 2009

Left at a wierd spot- animation is shakey, but this could be interesting if taken further.

Score: 8

"the Wii of flash games."

submission: Zombie Exploder

date: November 4, 2009

that's not to say that it was amazing- but it wasn't horrible either. The concept and game idea is VERY fun, and I'd like to seee you improve upon this.

The scripting WAS kinda glitchy though. There were times when I couldn't move, and then I'd get attacked by a zombie. It's frustrating. Not bad though.

Score: 4

"ok....."

submission: Egg Controller

date: November 4, 2009

good concept- needs more to it.

Score: 9

"It was nice."

submission: Pencilmation #10

date: November 4, 2009

I found myself getting bored with the story to be honest, but I admire the work, and how long this must have taken you. Good music, as well. Awesome work.

Score: 6

"For a pot head movie?....well..."

submission: Sweet Importance

date: November 2, 2009

I think I actually DID get the jist of what you were trying to say...though it was a little foggy at first.

If you really want to do animations though, you should start from square one and improve some basic drawing skills. It wasn't bad, but there were some VERY obvious mistakes.

You should also try to make a storyboard, so that a concept is more clear throughout your story. You didn't transistion between scenes very well.

Othere than that though, I think you did ok. I really would like to see what you'd make after improving.

Good luck!