Draconianspirit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zombie Life Insurance?]

little rough but not bad.

effort was shown, which is awesome. for your second one, not bad.

One part in the beginning where the words went faster than the mouth. Put your audio on stream when you're working on it, and try working on each little syllable. The more exxagerated, the better it'll be.

Also keep expression in mind when you're doing your lip sync. The entire time your dude was smiling xDD even at the end when the voice sounded like he was angry or frustrated.

Not bad though. keep practicing. This is good for a second time.

[The DeadBeat Dad Part 1]

Hey!...not bad at all.

Hey, first flash?....Not too shabby dude. Lot better than my first flash. So I'm gonna pretend I'm not a noob and critique you on what I DID see wrong with it..xDD

You definatly did some nice lip sync, and your sounds were all in the right place. You have the great start to a funny line of episodes. I would pay a little more attention to the detail on the backrounds, and to things like the shed and stuff. Also check to make sure that you don't have any "blank" spaces where there shouldn't be. (in other words make sure things are colored in completly.)

But definatly a good roll. I look forward to seeing more from you.

[An Unlucky Day]

lol....

I left my computer and came back and your animation was still playing.

Your animation is nice, as is the creative home-made sound effects you did. Overall not a bad job, but dont make it so long next time. You kinda dragged it out, and after thing after thing, it got a bit boring.

[Complimentary (clay)]

All my five

R belong to this.

This was incredible. Very unique, and your claymation was fliud, and life-like. Bravo, all ten for this.

The only thing that bugged me, was the song you picked for it. It didnt seem to match what was going on in your claymation, but other than that, great work.

MackProductions responds:

Thank you! I understand about the song, it's meaning doesn't connect much at all to the animation's meaning. I used it more for the sound of the song and edited the video to match up with certain beats and everything.
Thanks for the review!

[darknessdweller]

I'm sorry...

can you direct me and show me where it's protected?...

And even if it is....

it's not all that great. sorry. No entertainment, no movement, just music, and a card.

[Foamy's Rant IV]

YES

Bravo!!!!

[Metal Gear: Hands On]

lol

a nice start.

[At Chapters End]

Nice

Nice job. It needsa bit more animation I think, and your audio was a little muffled, but it was a nice message overall, and somthing that we all could learn from. awesome work.

ernie-doc responds:

Thank you I will be working on your suggestions.

[The_Flower]

Gots an abstract feel.

I like it. Lets your mind wander and think about it. Awesome job.

[Stick Movie Sonic Crosovr]

well.....ok...

You had a front loader, more than what most newbies have. You had limited animation....not counting the sprites, and your backround was a bit bland....

For your first time though....not bad. Add some color though dude, and spend more time on your art.

Not bad though.