Draconianspirit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bitey plays around]

well...

It's very good to look up to other artists, and to learn from them, but imitation isn't the highest form of flattery.

I understand that this was not intended to "steal" or whatever. I'm not accusing you of that, but you should come up with your own original ideas. That's the reason for the low score. I do hope to see your stuff in the future though. Keep at it.

OctoFlash responds:

my "own" creative stuff can be found on octoflash.devianart.com
still, my work is inspired by adam phillips and what i did here is called fanart.

also, i don't know if you're aware that you can perfectly learn by using references and looking at other artist's works.
anyways, thanks for your time.

[Beaver Dam Ep. 1 (RANDOM)]

lol..cute...

didn't make ANY kind of coherant sense, but you had a preloader, sound, some lip sync, and a pretty start button. Not bad for a first timer. Not bad at all. Keep at it, even if this does get blammed.

audi0surfvalve responds:

Thanks! I am gonna make more of the "Beaver Dam" sieries, but with more voices, characters, and better animation, thi is just somthing i put together because i got a little inspired when my friend randomly yelled " Beaver dam " when i was playing skate 2

[Box Goes for a Walk]

LOL!! Cute.

Very cute...xDD cutsey animation, with cute little bunnies...it almost killed me xDDD

I would like to have seen some squash and stretch in the green glob....but pfft. other than that xDD...you know...random...but it works..

ChilliDog responds:

Thanks a lot! Surprised to see a new review :)

[Walk Cycle with Frills]

beautiful dude

TOTALLY didn't expect what I saw. This is beautiful dude, I love it.

How much of it did you take into photoshop? It's very well done for just being in Flash. But yeah..the detail and time taken into the backround and the dead characters, is just amazing.

AWesome work. This should have a MUCH higher score. 10/10 and 5/5 dude. Keep it up!

BansheeIndian responds:

Hey man thanks for the support, that goes for everyone that responded too! I've always got such bad ratings posting shit in new grounds it's discouraging...ah well still gotta love it

Umm most of the background plates were in photoshop, the clouds the mountains the grass and the sandy area, everything else was done in flash.

Honestly I didn't have much of an idea of what I was doing at the time it just grew completely out of proportion if I had it to do over again I would have probably just done it all in flash, it can handle it.

anyways thanks again for the support

[Surrounded]

lol. cute xD

Not bad for your first I suppose. If you're going to outline use a thicker line, this one is all choppy and hard to make out. You might get a bit ribbed for your lack of funny..xD...(no offense)....

ALso, make the voices....less garbled. Little hard to make out what tehy were saying. Other than that though, keep it up.

Oznedabar responds:

This was just an experiment, next time I'll use something that's actually funny, and I'll let Cavia do the graphics, so they'll be less choppy. Thanks for the review

[Another Sword Short]

lol. Cute.

Cute little animation. Bit sloppy. I would take some more time, if you're gonna do stick art...to refine the lines?..xDD so that it's a little cleaner...don't use such a thick line size, and work on some storylines no?...somthing to make it a little longer.

Good with the audio though.

Dasimonster responds:

Sloppy? Ok, ill try making it a bit cleaner next time~Thanks!

[Hexagon n' Rectangle]

I'm tired of seeing these.

Nothing original NO offense. And the storyline didn't keep me interested to keep me watching it.

Biddiexpress responds:

I know, I felt so dirty after submitting it.

[Complimentary (clay)]

All my five

R belong to this.

This was incredible. Very unique, and your claymation was fliud, and life-like. Bravo, all ten for this.

The only thing that bugged me, was the song you picked for it. It didnt seem to match what was going on in your claymation, but other than that, great work.

MackProductions responds:

Thank you! I understand about the song, it's meaning doesn't connect much at all to the animation's meaning. I used it more for the sound of the song and edited the video to match up with certain beats and everything.
Thanks for the review!

[At Chapters End]

Nice

Nice job. It needsa bit more animation I think, and your audio was a little muffled, but it was a nice message overall, and somthing that we all could learn from. awesome work.

ernie-doc responds:

Thank you I will be working on your suggestions.

[Cog of Man]

definate win

huzzah.

PropagandaClock responds:

Thank you! The ClockCrew loves all and everyone equally!
But we love those who give out 10's more equally.