Draconianspirit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The edge of the forest]

Trees! Sun! Seed! Walrus!

It was good, the music fit the tone nicely, and you definatly opened the scene up with the crow nicely. I like it. A lot. I got a little bored with it though, specially through the day and night sequences. I apprecaite that you were trying to keep it as "real" as possible, to get the message across in a stronger way, but what good is a message if your viewer gets bored before the end of the movie eh? xD

But no, seriously it's good, and I'd like to see more from you in the future. Keep up the good work, I would just work on more perspective.

[Mysticeti Legion]

as you already know.

Your transitions with scenes, and sounds were jerky and out of place- but damn, You worked with SOUND...which is a pain in the arse to get correct anyways. Good for a first submission. Well done.

[Box Goes for a Walk]

LOL!! Cute.

Very cute...xDD cutsey animation, with cute little bunnies...it almost killed me xDDD

I would like to have seen some squash and stretch in the green glob....but pfft. other than that xDD...you know...random...but it works..

ChilliDog responds:

Thanks a lot! Surprised to see a new review :)

[Walk Cycle with Frills]

beautiful dude

TOTALLY didn't expect what I saw. This is beautiful dude, I love it.

How much of it did you take into photoshop? It's very well done for just being in Flash. But yeah..the detail and time taken into the backround and the dead characters, is just amazing.

AWesome work. This should have a MUCH higher score. 10/10 and 5/5 dude. Keep it up!

BansheeIndian responds:

Hey man thanks for the support, that goes for everyone that responded too! I've always got such bad ratings posting shit in new grounds it's discouraging...ah well still gotta love it

Umm most of the background plates were in photoshop, the clouds the mountains the grass and the sandy area, everything else was done in flash.

Honestly I didn't have much of an idea of what I was doing at the time it just grew completely out of proportion if I had it to do over again I would have probably just done it all in flash, it can handle it.

anyways thanks again for the support

[Dad's at Work]

sweeet xDD

Nice job ^^ can't wait to see the rest =D I'm wishing the credits went by quicker so that I had time to read and enjoy the dance cycles that you made for everyone, so I'lmma mark you a star down for that....but nicely done overall.

[Surrounded]

lol. cute xD

Not bad for your first I suppose. If you're going to outline use a thicker line, this one is all choppy and hard to make out. You might get a bit ribbed for your lack of funny..xD...(no offense)....

ALso, make the voices....less garbled. Little hard to make out what tehy were saying. Other than that though, keep it up.

Oznedabar responds:

This was just an experiment, next time I'll use something that's actually funny, and I'll let Cavia do the graphics, so they'll be less choppy. Thanks for the review

[mario VS sonik OMG]

erm.

if tehre was more to it..and some substance for story?...random dick just popping up out of nowhere...and then the last scene with the duck thing just nearly blew my speakers....

It makes no sense...and there are flash's out there that don't make sense...but they're still good?...You need to work on a more abstract and longer concept if you're going to go that route...

Good luck in the future.

[Stickfigure Madness]

it was cute.

I kinda lost interest in it, due to...just randomness....that didn't really catch my attention. Your animation was decent, and the song was nice. xDD You used a couple of noticable tweens, which I suppose isn't bad, but still noticable.

For your next one, I would say work on actually putting in sound rather than just a song....have things sync a little bit. But for what you have...it's cool. Marking you down on a couple of noobish things ( I really can't say much cause I'm probably more of a noob than you are...) but not a bad overall.

[Another Sword Short]

lol. Cute.

Cute little animation. Bit sloppy. I would take some more time, if you're gonna do stick art...to refine the lines?..xDD so that it's a little cleaner...don't use such a thick line size, and work on some storylines no?...somthing to make it a little longer.

Good with the audio though.

Dasimonster responds:

Sloppy? Ok, ill try making it a bit cleaner next time~Thanks!

[Hexagon n' Rectangle]

I'm tired of seeing these.

Nothing original NO offense. And the storyline didn't keep me interested to keep me watching it.

Biddiexpress responds:

I know, I felt so dirty after submitting it.