Draconianspirit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sprite A Day: 2]

crap

I'm cool with random crap..but this...was just...crap.

Your audio was horrible, and you had buttons to things that did NOTHING.

[this is what i look like]

hmm....not bad.

I would wait a bit before submitting it though.

You should really work on your lip synch, which means it may not be up by tomorrow, but it would really improve the quality of your flash.

The drawings are nice, and I like the simple animation, though there was one scene that lasted a bit too long...

I would also add a fade to your song at the end there, so it doesnt stop abruptly...

But nice job overall.

[Damged -Rebuild- FIXED]

heh!

At first I didnt really like it, due to the fact that your scenes lasted too long, and there wasnt much variety in the way of animation.

But as I watched it, I got hooked, and I think now overall, I like it. The message was real nice, very sad, but nice overall.

Need to work on your animation a little bit, but other than that, cool work.

Manga-Otaku responds:

^^

Thanks!

[DBZ stick fight animation]

it's ok..

needs a backround or two....

sound snych and animation is pretty good though.

[John and Joe 4]

ok...

It wasnt bad....

you need to work on your animation, but it had an actual storyline, and nice backrounds.

Your sound also synched well. Just work on your animation now dude, and you'll be set.

PinClock responds:

Thanks alot

[Once When I was a Kid 3]

Niiiice!

Original, funny, and great style.

Backrounds were a little blurry in some parts, but awesome job!

[Short madness retrevation]

sigh....another madness

There's no originality. I mean, you might have a storyline that's unique to you, but tons of people have madness....stick figures shooting each other. To make it more exciting, have some jumps or, have them dodging or somthing.

Your animation is real nice though.

[@@@kewl Seizure Funzor@@@]

more options

more options, different stuff, could be good.

[Madness mayhem Trailer]

well....

this looks great, the animation is cool, but it's not original. I mean...there's tons of these on newgrounds.

I look forward to the movie, but make the storyline unique eh?

Sunshaft responds:

it s done

[Space Crusade Animation]

Not bad

Space stuff was never really a topic I liked, but I aint judging on that. =P For 16 that was pretty kickass. I don't see any point in critiquing since you probably see all of the errors and you're 22 now xD So I'll drop my ten and leave. :-)

ColbyCheeze responds:

Haha ya man it's interesting to see some of the stuff I did back then and be like "man I should have done this or that" but oh well it was fun.