wow
your animation was a little simplisitc,it felt like the birds should have had more movement. but the message and theme really, really cut through. Great job.
wow
your animation was a little simplisitc,it felt like the birds should have had more movement. but the message and theme really, really cut through. Great job.
yeah, i am aware of the lack of animation, but i'd like to expand on it.
hah!
the animation was a bit simple, but teh sound effects and storyline just enthralled me. ^^ great job dude.
hmmm
this is cool, and your perspective and anatomy isnt too bad either, work more on hte backrounds though.
Not bad,
You used a lot of elements that is hard to use when animating. Not bad overall. The ending was pretty random, but it made me giggle. XD I love it when knuckles wins. He's my fave character. My suggetion to you would be to use a thinner lineart. It would make the overall piece look a lot neater. But great great job overall.
lol
It was ok...I mean it wasnt all that. bad, it did get a little monotonous after a little while because you kept repeating things over and over, but even if the animation WAS simple, it wasnt a bad idea.
Next time think of more things to put into the vid and take your time.
Hehe
Not bad. It was kinda short, but your animation was nice. You definatly have your own style too, so great job.
well...
It definatly matches the title of what you're doing...
Hiberna was a bit right with the drawing, I suppose the animation isnt all that bad, and you got the sound to match up with what you were animating...so yeah. Extremly short, but not the most horrible thing I've seen on newgrounds.
Thanks for the kind parts of your reveiw!
heh.
I havnt watched Naruto so I don't understand most of the jokes going around.
Your lip synch is really good, and the animation isnt all that bad. It's cool that you got more than one little short in there as well. The audio isnt all that clear, so it was a little difficult to hear what was going on, unless you really listened to it, and then I had my volume cranked. Animation was fair, could have been worse. For your second time this is pretty good.
I'm going to school for cartoon animation and illustration, so I hope to have some flash vids up here in the future. For now, I'm just getting comfortable here at newgrounds.
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