Draconianspirit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Emo duck]

LOL

that mickey was fucking scary!......

but other than that...loved it.

4chan-city-fan responds:

mickey wristwatch XD

[How 2 Heal Bruises]

yeah, you had a preloader...

It just skipped to the end it seems. Anywho, I see some mild humor, which made me chuckle. Lucky for you my muse is easily tickeled. It was ok overall, the only thing that bugged me is that.

a. the font was too fancy, had a hard time reading it.
b. your scenes with the font went by too quickly so I couldnt read it the entire way through watching it the first time around.

Not a bad attempt though.

friendly-bear responds:

Note to self, lessen frame rate....

[Damged -Rebuild- FIXED]

heh!

At first I didnt really like it, due to the fact that your scenes lasted too long, and there wasnt much variety in the way of animation.

But as I watched it, I got hooked, and I think now overall, I like it. The message was real nice, very sad, but nice overall.

Need to work on your animation a little bit, but other than that, cool work.

Manga-Otaku responds:

^^

Thanks!

[John and Joe 4]

ok...

It wasnt bad....

you need to work on your animation, but it had an actual storyline, and nice backrounds.

Your sound also synched well. Just work on your animation now dude, and you'll be set.

PinClock responds:

Thanks alot

[Madness mayhem Trailer]

well....

this looks great, the animation is cool, but it's not original. I mean...there's tons of these on newgrounds.

I look forward to the movie, but make the storyline unique eh?

Sunshaft responds:

it s done

[Space Crusade Animation]

Not bad

Space stuff was never really a topic I liked, but I aint judging on that. =P For 16 that was pretty kickass. I don't see any point in critiquing since you probably see all of the errors and you're 22 now xD So I'll drop my ten and leave. :-)

ColbyCheeze responds:

Haha ya man it's interesting to see some of the stuff I did back then and be like "man I should have done this or that" but oh well it was fun.

[The Metaphor]

Hey nice!

Have to admit, finding a flash thing in the road was a bit corny, but your animation and the message was really nice. The music went well with the mood of your story.

The only thing that bugged me was lack of detail, but I suppose it's not necessary if you're trying to keep it simplistic on purpose.

Slim-Bean responds:

Thanks for the review!

To be honest I was toying with the idea of throwing the Flash Gordan Theme tune in when the Flash Box appeared. Obviously very glad I didn't now.

Next time I make something I think attention to detail will be one of my priorities.

Thanks again.

[SuperToast!]

Ok.......

It WAS original, you got me there, I guess maybe it was the fact that I got a little lost with hte storyline...first he was flying like superman, and then he got eaten?.....hmm,..

and your stage size is VERY tiny. A good large size would be 720 by 480.

other than that, not bad, the music went nicely with your animation.

jackstevens responds:

thanks dude :)
its a montage of what he can do (so far) ;)
he belts up, he flies about a bit then he meets his arch rival "mystery man" then he coughs up blood (jam) :)