yay!
I think you did a real nice job on this. Everything was nice and smooth, and easy to navigate, also easy to understand, and very informative.
I liked it. ^^ Plus I've always loved astronomy, so this was already a fave.
yay!
I think you did a real nice job on this. Everything was nice and smooth, and easy to navigate, also easy to understand, and very informative.
I liked it. ^^ Plus I've always loved astronomy, so this was already a fave.
Thank you... I eventually planning on making another one with more constellations, but I'm not sure if I will be able to do the "night sky" bit again (hard as Hell to make each constellation run smooth)...
Not Bad
Would be cool to see the animation a little smoother, but the concept is funny.
thanks! thats what i was going for
Not bad
Not bad. Your lip synch is REALLY nice. and the character totally fits the song..lol.
Any critique I might have, was already mentioned.
Well done, and keep it up.
thanks but i can only do good lip sync with songs with voices..........iy yi yi
wow
your animation was a little simplisitc,it felt like the birds should have had more movement. but the message and theme really, really cut through. Great job.
yeah, i am aware of the lack of animation, but i'd like to expand on it.
well...
It definatly matches the title of what you're doing...
Hiberna was a bit right with the drawing, I suppose the animation isnt all that bad, and you got the sound to match up with what you were animating...so yeah. Extremly short, but not the most horrible thing I've seen on newgrounds.
Thanks for the kind parts of your reveiw!
First time eh?
For your first time, it aint all that bad. The concept of the story is good, and the animation is not all that relativly bad. It's pretty smooth compared to what I've seen other people do for the first time.
It's cool that you have music, but it doesnt fit in with the story at all. When you see people shooting at dragons, you expect somthing a little more hardcore. You should also work on perspective of your drawings, and get to know them a little bit more when animating.
Since it's your first time, (plus I don't have anything up on newgrounds to top this.) I'm giving you a six for effort.
thank you a lot, I'll make the next one with more music and way more frames
I'm going to school for cartoon animation and illustration, so I hope to have some flash vids up here in the future. For now, I'm just getting comfortable here at newgrounds.
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