Draconianspirit's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nerd Love]

it was cute

For a first not bad. It was cute. Errors here and there, but who doesn'thave em eh?

[Canine Tales- Dearest]

It's nice

It is pleasant, and I already watch you on deviantart. ;-) And your illustration skills ARE good, but I was hoping to see a little more movement from the dogs. It was mostly tweens.

Not bad for an experiment though. Hope to see more. :-)

[Pencilmation #10]

It was nice.

I found myself getting bored with the story to be honest, but I admire the work, and how long this must have taken you. Good music, as well. Awesome work.

[Sweet Importance]

For a pot head movie?....well...

I think I actually DID get the jist of what you were trying to say...though it was a little foggy at first.

If you really want to do animations though, you should start from square one and improve some basic drawing skills. It wasn't bad, but there were some VERY obvious mistakes.

You should also try to make a storyboard, so that a concept is more clear throughout your story. You didn't transistion between scenes very well.

Othere than that though, I think you did ok. I really would like to see what you'd make after improving.

Good luck!

[Dem Pokermans]

I really liked this...

Could be better if the entire thing was in color, OR you improved your lnieart...sometimes it was hard to tell what was happening..like the scene with the rock? Overall neatness could do this wonders. Keep it up.

[Sonic's World NX ver.]

Only one prob.

and I found that to be the fact that you zoomed in REALLY close to the sprites? Since they're pixel based, they look cruddy when they're so close....but the actual movie was nice to watch. Nice job.

[Camizone]

aww!! this was cute.

Not horrible. Not perfect, but very cute. I like this.

[Beaver Dam Ep. 1 (RANDOM)]

lol..cute...

didn't make ANY kind of coherant sense, but you had a preloader, sound, some lip sync, and a pretty start button. Not bad for a first timer. Not bad at all. Keep at it, even if this does get blammed.

audi0surfvalve responds:

Thanks! I am gonna make more of the "Beaver Dam" sieries, but with more voices, characters, and better animation, thi is just somthing i put together because i got a little inspired when my friend randomly yelled " Beaver dam " when i was playing skate 2